well
the build in this was very nice the melody was catchy and when the counter melody came in and took over i was quite happy but i do feel that it loops unapropriately it should build back up then loop
well
the build in this was very nice the melody was catchy and when the counter melody came in and took over i was quite happy but i do feel that it loops unapropriately it should build back up then loop
a couple things
1 the intro was way too long it took much too long to get interesting
2 its a bit repetitive
3 the drums were very nice a strong dnb feel
4 the melody was kinda nice just needs more work
5 the jump at 3:21 was very nice and the build afterwards worked nicely as well
Thanks for the response! I'll definately make changes accordingly :)
rawr
i think that a good solid harmony would make me like this song more
like the string entrance at 1:43 i believe it adds structure to the song gives it a stepping stool yaknow most of your song seems to lack it due to lack of melody
i did also like the counter melody there at 3:02
At 1:43 it does sound kinda empty huh?
hm...I might experiement.
Thanks for the review:]
needs more umph
try to be more agressive with the dynamics and the build
the build in this song just didnt seem to be strong enough
in a sense its missing that epic feel that dubstep is meant to have
much more technoy then dubstepy
It's just my style of dubstep.
Genre's slightly subjective, I don't want to overuse breakdowns/builds, but I'll try and get better at it.
Thank you:]
i like
my drum step much dirtier this is more like dnb with very mild dubstep additions to the bass to make it a little harsher
but thats my opinion i also think its a bit short for either dnb or dubstep you need a little more space to really get into it
Yes, but you would be surprised that there are even more melodalic Drumstep songs out there. We as musicians should really be open minded when making music.
I know dubstep and drumstep is known for being dirty. But it doenst have to be that way. WE choose it to be so.
I also understand you wanting it to be longer but. its ment for a short animation im making for madness day. Hopefully i actually make it! :P
Thank you for the review!
you will
create a longer one
... i hope jedi mind tricks work over the internet
Me too
lower the
the bass a little and you need to make it run smoother your song is running more like a dub step song without the dubstep instruments
thats been my problem on a few songs, and I couldn't get that annoying sound to stop i the second half of the song:S
ok ...
lower that clap its torture
this song lack any melody at all add some sort of lead synth andmake it move fast
Oh yeah I'm planning on adding a melody and also tweaking the levels and the equalizer. Keep an eye out for future uploads and thanks for the review
final fantasy v
would be my second fav tied with 8 my fav is 7
decent remix but i think you need to tone down that main synth/pad
its comeing off way too strong and overpowering the rest of the song
hehehe thanks i'll have that in mind i'm glad you like it :D
its nice
this one is also to short and i thinks that it could build a little better at :30 little more gain in the volume and make it a bit more epic feeling
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
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