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ya know this song actually sounds pretty main stream if thats what you were going for. the progression was fairly predictable but thats not really a problem. there were some good melodies in there. i also liked the harmony. the harmony was quite evolved not just a plain harmony so thats appreciated.

SuperGoodSound responds:

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sounds like your useing a side chain and it works. what i feel this song is missing are drums. if you put them in i cant hear them. you should put a heavy bass drum every time the side chain hits. the song needs to be longer. house songs are longer >:( make it longer! house lovers like me get disapointed if the house song is under 3 min.

Directinput responds:

this isnt even a song aha. it was just some chords i didn't know what to do with. i may add more to it in the future.

so i liked the melody in the song but it felt like it was missing something. i don't know for sure but it just feels like it lacks something. maybe adding a counter melody or making the harmony more advanced would pull it together. i liked everything about it it just feels like its missing something sorry.

DJ-Grapefruit responds:

Thanks for the review, I always appreciate that :P
I don't really know what to do about that, but I might give it a try :D

for some reason it eels more like a saturday to me :P
really though i like this a lot good progression good melody good emotion.

SamMattimore responds:

haha :P thanks dude :D

ok a couple things. i think your cleans could use some work. i also think that your drums could be stronger and more supportive of the drops. i love your drops there different they stand out while beside other dubstep songs. different is good different will take you further. don't let someone tell you that you need to change your style.

Kruizy responds:

Thank you! :)

i liked it a lot. you have progreessed a lot and this song is proof of it. so critique time. there are some pats where the progression wasn't as good as it couldv'e been just a part here and there where adding a small adjustment wouldv'e made all the difference but to a counter to that the rest of the progression was amazing you made an emotion out of your music which is something a lot of people have trouble doing.
great job. don't give up. keep going and keep making music.

Seifire responds:

Thanks decoy, this song took a lot of time and effort and I think I'm fairly happy with the result.

for a dubstep i think it could use stronger dynamics. ya know harder drops softer cleans.the atmosphere was good and the melody was spotless good work.

DJ-Babokon responds:

Thanks but I thought the drop went in pretty hard compared to the breakdowns?

i think there is a little too much sustain on the reverb on the pianoin the beginning. also this song lacks a strong harmony part especially at parts like :35-1:20.a strong harmony world help a lot. the melody is very nice but it just needs that support

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

I think the reverb is fine, but it needs shortened, so yeah the sustain is a little much. and noted, thanks:]

i think you need a new recorder but other then that the song is quite nice

mmFOOD responds:

Yeah I know. Unfortunately I lack quality equipment and I can't afford it either at the moment. :/ Maybe someday I'll be able to record something in an actual studio.

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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