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congrats i like it :) it doesnt start to well but once the moving notes at :42 come in its really nice. it was a good choice of instrument and it has some good melody and progression. i also like the break with the cymbal at 2:04 it added a good effect

Seifire responds:

Thanks! I decided to use a cymbal for the break rather than an FX because it seemed to fit the mood a bit more.

i think this song just needs an upgrade. you need more experience with the program i think. i like the concept but i dont feel it was exacuted properly

Jay responds:

I agree, I either need to get better at mixing or find someone to mix for me. Thanks for the review.

i would like to hear a little more progression but other then that i like how this song makes you feel while listening to it i just feel that with out more progression it will get old to fast

The-Cockenator responds:

Well it isnt supose to be progressive cus it dosent have the right atmo to be progressive unless i use more happy synths but thanks anyways :D

this is a very beautiful song. you got what sounds like a mastering problem when the strings come in.

Ritz190 responds:

mhmm. wasn't sure how to make the strings come in. they sound really weird to me. but thanks alot for the review!

you cant have a 15 sec loop sir. its like putting mustard on your icecream nobody really wants it. the drums are to heavy for ambient as well

g4ebguyGT responds:

After listening to your music, I don't believe you have any room to talk here. This song has emotion that is the point of the hardstyle drum and soft pad. Your not even close to being in a club or hardstyle genre so stay out of my territory.

hearing this song instantly brought a smile to my face. not quite because the sng but because of the elements in the song. i can tell your fairly new to music making do your self a favor and be careful with arps. they can make your music both fly and crash. the arp that came in at 23 wasnt a good choice. i hope you can understand what im talking about

skylukewalker99 responds:

Okay, thanks for the advice on the arps. I'll edit this song a little to make the arps better, and message you when i re-upload.

wow... i dont know who you are but this whole song was very surprising. my biggest problem and i know its sad but the song doesnt live up to the intro. the intro is amazing then the rest of the song comes by and its half as cool as the intro. sorry bro

Kirbyfemur responds:

Nah that's alright. There is still plenty i want to do with this, hopefully i'll be able to keep the good going with an update soon. Thanks for the feedback man

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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