this is
cool
i think the bass in the beginning is a bit to dominating
pm me when its done
me like
this is
cool
i think the bass in the beginning is a bit to dominating
pm me when its done
me like
I think I see what you mean, but do you mean the kick drum or the bassline? And yes, I'll pm you when I'm done. ^_^
ya kno
you are one of those unappreciated artists out there who deserve more then what they receive
the concept behind the song is amazing and really the song itself is just bloody friken beautiful
but i do feel it was a bit repetitive and it couldve been a lot more dramatic and honestly with what you had i hear potential for a good two minutes more of song
part of me wants to mess with it myself but i keep reaching the conclusion of " this guy is out of my league even if he did send me the file the second it opens up you probably wont have half the plugins or understand any of it" lol but i can always just play with it in my mind i guess
Hah, thanks for the review man, appreciate it :)
and believe it or not but i actually managed to lose more than half of the song because i didn't save the file after i exported it and just mindlessly closed FL :( I can still send you whatever's left of it though (which isn't much) if you really want.
its very
peaceful and gloomy
nice epitome of sadness feel
i like the message in the comments as well
that stuff cuts deep especially well with the music
I agree with you, mate. Whew... the real story to it is just as gloomy.
quite relaxing
it has kind of a nostalgic feel to it
it also has a scary movie bgm type of feel
something you would expect to hear out of resident evil you know what im saying??
this is a true ambient too so it goes well with home work and studying and such
it did seem to drag a little in the middle but its ambient so it really doesnt matter
my favorite part is from 1:00 to 7:52 but after that is where it just kinda sits to much for me
i guess its because its the middle of the song and i expect it to do a little more
Ambient music can seem to drag on at points, and I tried my best to switch up moods and including small patterns. Ambient is the sort of track you should prepare yourself for, allowing your mind to open fairly well to experience music in a different way. And hey, rate honestly lol. If you don't like it after 7:52, then rate it lower then 10 :P As I said in the authors comments, I don't expect everyone to like this UBER SERIOUS CORNY TRACK lol.
this song
makes me conflicted
the melodies and such are really good but theyre poorly placed it clashes
in the beginning, where the static pops - was made on accident, but i like it so i didn't change that.
a very
solid intro you have here its strong and really helps bring the song to the right level
very nice vocals as well nice massage and pretty easy to understand for a standard metal listener
Thanks a lot man! I really worked on pronounciation on this one to make the lyrics as understandable as possible! Glad you liked them :D
you
need more practice thats all i can really tell you
the concept isnt bad but it needs more structure
im sure you will get there eventually
And more mixing, I know. The kick in a car with good audio needs more punch. Listening in a set of head phones or PC speakers does not give this song much help.
Thanks for the critique!
this
is quite beautiful
very calming even though its fast paced
my only issue is the piano what it sounds like
it comes in at the beginning after the flute
when the song starts to pick up i think you should change up the notes a bit its to loud to be as repetitive as it is in my personal opinion
other then that its a great song
i specifically liked the builds
Thank you for your review, i'll try to improve on those things if I can, and possibly reupload later with the result. I do thank you for the time you took to review and listen to the song.
Thanks again ^_^,
JMChurch
when
i listen to this it makes me think of a guy woke up one day and his girlfriend was gone after talking to her parents they said the last place she said she was at was the forest so he goes there as fast as he can to try to find her but im not sure how it ends but my heart says he finds her in the end
i might just make a flash of it one day and use this :)
so for a name i would probably call it "trying to find her" or something along those lines
my only large problem with this song is i wish it had a bigger climax and a stronger ending
ps if you ever need another review just dens me a link kay n_n
i enjoy helping people like you get better
That would be really cool, thank you so much for giving me a real review, this is the second one I've ever gotten. All my other music this far has been way different from this but if I ever make something I think you will like I'll be sure to link it to you. Again thanks a bunch.
having fun with gross beat are we?
you need some more practice it will help a lot on the long run
also try not to use presets its unprofessional and a lot of people consider it uncreative
of course if you are not very serious about music then none of this really matters just keep having fun
haha, I always add that I used gross beats in the description on my sound cloud account. In fact pretty much half of my songs on here are me messing around with gross beats. When I use gross beats on my serious songs I do make my own presets although they are mostly variations of the presets. Also I did it all in one take with little practice or idea of where I was going. Again thanks for the review, also what song first led you to my profile?
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 31, Male
fixing the world
usa ohio
Joined on 8/23/10