:\ uuuh
i dont care for this to much :( srry i still 5d it it sounds to inconsistent i also think it should be longer i think it has potential but it just doesent do it for me srry
ps im working with the fl demo as well so i totally feel your pain
:\ uuuh
i dont care for this to much :( srry i still 5d it it sounds to inconsistent i also think it should be longer i think it has potential but it just doesent do it for me srry
ps im working with the fl demo as well so i totally feel your pain
Don't be sorry bro. :3
Well, do you think it fits my goal?
Anyways. What didn't you likee? Such as, how wasn't it consistent? Drum beats changed when I changed the pattern?
Well, thank you though. :3
Glad to see some honesty.
harmony
it needs some kind of harmony to fill the bits of emptiness here and there i also agree with solkrieg that the note placement could be a bit more regulated some of it dosent work to great over all its good but can definately be better
Well, where doesn't it work? I tried to link chord to another chord. I'm thinking towards the end though, right? Well, could you try a stab at it and show me what you mean? I might be a little blocked cuz I know it this way. D:
Also, I'm working on trying to create harmonies, but that's an area I lack. I can make chords but screw with harmonies and melodies. I'm only good with chords. -.-
Thank you though. :3
wow
i dopnt know why you dropped it it sounds very good i can definately hear this in a game for many different situations
It's dropped because the guy i was working for dissapeared from the face of the earth for 3 months and never gave a reason why.
for the most part
its good but the breaks are a little harsh try and make the breaks softer
How ?
nice but
i actually really love that beginning arp melody but at :23 when that instrument that sounds like mr. game and watch that instrument does not go to well with the rest of the piece also a counter melody made the right way would be amazing in this song finally your low bass which seems to be filling the harmony spot at spots like :44 should sound a bit softer and smoother but in the other places its fine also a counter harmony would be just epic here especially at 1:28 i would like it if you tried to remake this and sent me a pm when its done
Thanks for leaving a comment and making some suggestions. But I like to keep my songs sort of minimalistic, so I'm probably not going to change anything lol, maybe if the left side of my earphones start working again
EDIT: I feed harmony to my cat
nice but
that beginning instrument wow um its a bit much i feel it over powers a lot of the instruments taking away from that great dnb feel i love from your music also just a suggestion but also with that beginning instrument and beat i think it would sound awesome if it started out quiet and then gradually got louder to make one big crescendo from :00 to :16 also make it hit really hard on :37 and bring the volume up on everything there as well like i said just some advice you dont have have to do it otherwise its really good
NO, i dont mind the advice. There always good. I'll try apply all these advices in my future projects ;)
Thanks for the review!
amazing but
have you made this piece before or something it sounds incredibly familiar
No, I have not. The chord progression, however, is very common. That may be what you are hearing.
awesome but
at the break off around :58 i think the build could have been a bit stronger and after that second break after the build i feel that the entrance could have hit a lot harder
I agree, but I can't change it now. Its been used in a flash :/
very nice
it gives you that fantasy in the sky feeling its also quite relaxing love how it flows and moves very smooth
Thank you!
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 31, Male
fixing the world
usa ohio
Joined on 8/23/10