nice
i like the progression of this piece it has a nice vibe in general as well at 1:32 the instrument sounds a little to different and also through out the beginning of the song its a bit repetitive
nice
i like the progression of this piece it has a nice vibe in general as well at 1:32 the instrument sounds a little to different and also through out the beginning of the song its a bit repetitive
YEah, this originally was supposed to be making fun of dubstep... kinda veered away from that a little.
But if you listen to any piece of electronic music the beats tend to be repetitive. But when you're clubbing, you tend not to care. So, it's whatever.
well
its to simple honestly usually when you listen to dub ist supposed to be unpredictable in some way also i think your wobble shouldve been more dominant in dub the dub instruments are usually very strong this being your first dub im not being to hard on you dubstep is a very hard genre
...The wub was supposed to be more dominant? It was the only instrument apart from the drums...<.<
Have you listen to a lot of dubstep? Most of my favourite tracks have a buildup to a drop where the wub THEN becomes dominant.
Anyways. Keep in mind I was just trying to get my wobble down, since this is my first time evert making a wub haha.
nice
i really like the melody the beginning build is nice too but i feel this song is lacking any harmony element in the song at :54 is where i wouldve added it
Still working on it. I've put one in now and it's sounding okay :D Thanks for pointing it out :)
happy
its quite the happy song has a good feel i also like how you often use your old instruments in your new songs it gives a good sense of familiarity to your music i hear your music and if it didnt say the artist i would say " this has to be yourix"
the one part i didnt like about this song is the instrument at :53 it sounded fine as an instrument but i feel it was a little to hard i think if it was smother it would have worked better with the rest of the song
Glad you liked the fact about me using similiar instruments. This way people can know who made it with me tellin them. Yeah, the violin is overpowering.
Anyways thanks! for the review ;)
not bad
its not bad and it definately didnt deserve a blam
Thank youu, As said before its very very old work :)
good
there is a nice feel to it kinda uplifting i think more couldve been done with it though its good but just feels a bit plain
Lol...dude there has been more done to this, it's after 2:15, like I said this is a preview, im not submitting full songs here anymore, reason why is people just 0 bomb it all the time, I can't be assed to put em on here, that's why I've started selling ^^
Thanks for the review though!
nice
it sounded way better but i wish it was a bit louder i think there couldve been more to this your missing like a big changing melody in the middle i really like the background harmony how its almost not there so it is really just like a platform to elevate the song
ps i believe this is under classical or new age
Message me. I wanna know exactly what you mean. So far what I have here is a verse (if I'd put in vocals) a chorus and an ending chorus. Am I missing a bridge? Also if this is just going to be an instrumental, what should I add to make it sound more "complete"?
nice but
its not dubsteppy enough the build was nice and the drums were also i think the drums shouldve came in earlier and where the drums come in right now make a new instrument come in one of those classic dubstep instruments that everyone knows as a dubstep instrument
I wasn't really going for a dubstep type feel. More an ambient kinda Dub/DnB. Soft, but a fast beat done in half time with a standard dub "kick, snare". I'm still working on it, need to find more synths/pads. I bare that in mind.
Thanks for reviewing :D
i like
longer of course i think it could be a bit faster i would really like to hear this faster also the part that came in at :26 i think should have came in at :21 i think it could have built better as well
ok thats good I'll try that and see what its look like.
thanks for the help
586rick
nice
i like the build on this one but i think that at :19 or at least :29 you shouldve brought in some kind of heavy lead instrument to really just release the senses you know what i mean?? i really like this make it longer when you make the full version
I'm not sure if I'd be able to fit another in there, maybe a bass or something.
Thanks for the feedback :D
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 31, Male
fixing the world
usa ohio
Joined on 8/23/10