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.... wow

nice job i wouldnt have ever expected to hear something like this
in the beginning i dont think it connected all together to well but that got better as the song went

F-Meister responds:

Cheers :D

n_n

this is so pretty why isn't it longer?? will you make it longer for me ?? :)

dtrace responds:

Haha I've been pretty lazy lately, maybe one day lols.

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uuuuuhhh question did you sing the lyrics??? i hate to be mean but you need some lessons
the music in the background was amazing but there is some eq issues whenever the vocals come in you might want to fix that. as for lyrics well in my personal opinion i thought they also sucked but thats an opinion really so that doesnt matter.
seriously though if you enjoy singing rap or singing anything really get some lessons if you cant afford lessons google how to sing or get a book on it.
anybody can learn to sing you just need to put some effort into it ok :)

Crazi-Cajun-Studios responds:

The vocals were meant to sound like that all our equipment sucks tho cause we crappy equipment. Our music usually sounds better live. Until we get better equipment our music will sound like this always

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its always interesting when a musician such as yourself say that they "suck" when theyre obviously better then half of the people here on ng
yes there are problems with this song but at least it sounds as good as it does and at least you realize that there is problems others are either ignorant to the problems or are like me and just dont know how to fix those problems due to being a beginner

GrayZ responds:

Thanks, I think i've just lost patience with music haha, I need a break I think but thank you :)

ya know

i just got on newgrounds in order to listen to the original of this song but i noticed i had mail and im like " mail ! i love mail " and to my surprise its a newer better version of the song i was just about to listen to XD
i like this version better n_n . it seems put together better i also sense a change to the piano but i dont know for sure id have to listen to the old one to be sure.

this is really great stuff man you could really go somewhere with it

Solkrieg responds:

Thanks a lot! Everyone loves mail...unless it's an invoice... I hate invoices.

....heh

i dont listen to a lot of industrial but i listen enough to know that this is not industrial. its nice but not industrial. i would say it has potential though. on that metal instrument you have there add a little reverb and make the release softer and drag out a little. try and give the drums more depth and add a few more patterns while your at it. you might want to try and time out the entrances of that metal instrument as well.

this song has almost a crazy robot war prep kinda feel its nice :)

TechnicolourNuance responds:

Have you listened to KMFDM or Rob Zombie or even the Smashing Pumpkins? :p The bass might not have been industrial, but I tried.xD Industrial isn't purely electronic-.-
ANyways. Thanks for the advice. I'mma update with my band and see if I can add the bass in. :3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MKxosf l1E2g
(KMFDM - Juke-Joint Jezebel)

uhhh

i dont have much problems with the actual song but it sounds like there is a lot of recording quality issues im guessing it was done that way on purpose??

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

The lyrics. Are iffy I did my best to hide it ;) Im still working on it!!! Another thing is its not mastered and still working. On limiters. But I need to check the. Bass. Before I tune stuff. Thanks for ur time!!

hmmm

sounds like you got some eq issues there that or a bad recording device over all the song is nice you did a good job at adding the new instruments at the right time not a lot of people that are beginners do that so congrats

Subliminalvids responds:

Were you listening with stereo headphones? Since it is optimised for stereo.. But other than that I am aware that it is slightly too loud in some parts. Thanks for the feedback though!

i like this

there is room for improvement but its very nice. i like how soft it is and how it all flows

xxxZigZagxxx responds:

Thanks!

I put quite a lot into it, so glad you like it :)

Thx
Benjamin

nice

the quality is good and the song was pretty good to but i think those techno instruments should be more technoish

HighBallers responds:

thanks for the review, unfortunately my techno skills are not the best. plus i dont wanna overload my song with techno stuff, i keep my songs more on the metal side.

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

Age 31, Male

fixing the world

usa ohio

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