i like
but it seems to be missing a strong enough build to carry the rest of the song
so the melodies and the beats are to awesome to not have been brought out in a larger build
but i also dont know how you would achieve this because the nature of this song almost contridicts the idea i brought up so im not supprised that you didnt have a stronger build
11/10 for effort on that lead absolutely loved how it fit with the rest of the song