decoyultimatum's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Essence]

question

is it like part of hip hop to act overly confident?? if its just part of the genre then it doesnt matter but if it isnt then i find that awfully queer how they can all say this kind of stuff
the song was ok the lyrics were ok but i think that your vocals could use some work try using some dynamics and increasing your range of notes to really keep the listener listening

nunie7 responds:

Yes, in hip-hop it's very common to act confident when rhyming. Thanks for the critique.

[Techno_Loop]

mmmmm

its a good quality and very catchy but its too repetitive

RaidenWarrior responds:

Thanks for the response! I'm glad to hear some criticism on my work. :)

[Transition 2 UP FOR USE]

please

dont submit 11 sec songs

SlaughterOfTheGnomes responds:

It clearly is called a transition and it is under the loop category so you have nothing to complain about, it's appropriately titled.

[Quiet Triumph]

????

the song was nice but do you realize that you have like 5 min of empty music

CheckeredZebra responds:

Yeah, I fixed that, although for some reason there are still a few measures of silence. Just gonna have to ignore it >>;

Still working on it as we speak ^__^;

[KVM]

i like

it has a nice feel to it the way it just kinda flows. i suggest that when your make songs calm and repetitive that you dont make them as long or change them more through the song because it can get slightly annoying. i personally could only listen to this like twice while doing something else. it just gets a little old ya know?

InvisibleObserver responds:

A fair number of people share your feelings. The 'chorus' of the song repeats like 4times and while it is down-tempo-ambient-ish, there is a bit of a pop structure to the song in that it does have repetitive elements. It seems much like most pop music, some people either really like it, or are much less inclined to listen to it again.

I know exactly what you mean.

[Tetris on my piano]

please

try and get a better recording device if you actually played this then your amazing btw it flows very well i would have liked to hear more dynamics though

xxDjShockxx responds:

I'm limited by my gear, sadly :(

[Liquid Sepia [MP]]

this song

is just one of those songs that make me happy
i think the beginning is amazing everything works together.
at 1:24 i like the change in direction but how it still follows the main idea of the song but i feel the instrument was the wrong one for the job it sounds a little dark and gloomy which is contradictory to the rest of the song and clashes up a storm.
i like the instrument at 1:53 but i dont like how it trills. it doesnt blend with the song right i think it would be better as a slured long not of the same instrument.
overall its a great song with some minor clashing parts but im ok with that im not to picky :)

MindprowlerMusic responds:

Thanks for the feedback, man. I do regret using the farts around 1:24 and would probably go back and change it if I hadn't already uploaded it all around the interwebs. I've got several more tracks uploaded as well if you want to take a listen to those. Thanks for commenting!

[=Glitch=]

i feel ya

i got the same problem my cpu runs so bad that half the time when i close fl it freezes

anyways i liked this song i think there is a lot that can be done with it definately go back to it man

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

I plan on it, maybe taking a break while making this isn't a bad thing, I've come up with quite a few ideas sitting here thinking about it. But maybe if FL hadn't been skipping during playback, I'd have come up with something amazing but messing in piano roll-_-
XD

Thank you for the review.

[[Star]*]

nice :)

its very soft and relaxing but it reminds me of more of a trance instead.
i really enjoyed the way it built and evolved on itself.

Solkrieg responds:

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

As for the trance, I couldn't really think of which it belonged in more, trance or techno.

[>--Dark Tropic--<]

well

i like the concept and the main composition but i feel you need to change the instruments your using or at least change how they sound. the second instrument isnt to bad but that first instrument im guessing is the fl guitar needs to go

Zeaser responds:

thank you :) i will certainly take your suggestions in consideration