well then
i like what you have done extreamly nice i specificaly like the intro it built perfectly but i feel that it was lacking and focal cliamx it feels like there should something big at 2:02 but it just kinda climbs and then dosent do anything also at 1:32 the notes sound to staccato they make them more smooth and legato to really sell the peice i like the concept behind the notes but it would be excuted better with legato notes is all
dont stop sending stuff man it sounds great and you can definately go somewhere with this i could see this being used in a lot of ways heck if i get the chance to when i get my book to anime i would love to use it if those tiny things where changed
ps sorry for the long review
with much respect
{DecoyUltimatum}