hmmm
sounds like you got some eq issues there that or a bad recording device over all the song is nice you did a good job at adding the new instruments at the right time not a lot of people that are beginners do that so congrats
hmmm
sounds like you got some eq issues there that or a bad recording device over all the song is nice you did a good job at adding the new instruments at the right time not a lot of people that are beginners do that so congrats
Were you listening with stereo headphones? Since it is optimised for stereo.. But other than that I am aware that it is slightly too loud in some parts. Thanks for the feedback though!
i like this
there is room for improvement but its very nice. i like how soft it is and how it all flows
nice
the quality is good and the song was pretty good to but i think those techno instruments should be more technoish
thanks for the review, unfortunately my techno skills are not the best. plus i dont wanna overload my song with techno stuff, i keep my songs more on the metal side.
nice
i liked this but i feel that while the main melody was going i think you should have a dark mysterious counter melody in the background to really sell it also i think it should be longer
nice
i liked it a lot i feel the beginning was pretty but drug on a little to much with the piano in the beginning a also like the thunder and rain in the back ground nice touch although i dont think it fits in trance usually trance has a faster drum beats which is why theyre usually upbeat i would mark this under misc. or ambient or classical but its not average classical so i dont know :/
nice
i like the way this flows its nice and smooth. might i suggest that when you have the drums in a higher role like in this song to add some different beats and dynamics on them it adds a lot of color to the music if you know what i mean. i also like that fade out its nice :)
i like
the beginning was a little shifty but the rest of the song was great i like how the song moves the build was good also. this song keeps you on your toes its nice :)
question
is it like part of hip hop to act overly confident?? if its just part of the genre then it doesnt matter but if it isnt then i find that awfully queer how they can all say this kind of stuff
the song was ok the lyrics were ok but i think that your vocals could use some work try using some dynamics and increasing your range of notes to really keep the listener listening
Yes, in hip-hop it's very common to act confident when rhyming. Thanks for the critique.
mmmmm
its a good quality and very catchy but its too repetitive
Thanks for the response! I'm glad to hear some criticism on my work. :)
please
dont submit 11 sec songs
It clearly is called a transition and it is under the loop category so you have nothing to complain about, it's appropriately titled.
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
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