Your music is always very nice and your arps are very strong but, they're so short I wish there was more.
Your music is always very nice and your arps are very strong but, they're so short I wish there was more.
thank u. maybe one day i will make something longer... i dont think i have the capacity. I just open up my daw when i get an idea and never revisit it. x)
ty for the kind words
definitely a fashion show strut yo stuff.
i liked this a lot it was peaceful and moved at a good pace with plenty of actual music and transitions that really make the trance genre. my only complaint is that i think th end should have had a stronger end it was kinda just over you know?? like eating ice cream but throwing away the cone.
now will you listen to my song?
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/581368?updated=1
Good comparison between song and ice cream, thanks. :)
I'm going to listen to your work too.
roooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggggggggghhhh but then 45 seconds later im all sad cause its over ive always found heavy metal easy to make its part of the beauty of it i guess
Don't be sad, I am BALLIN' this out! I'll have updates up VERY soon ;)
its very nice
Thanks a lot :)
i dont want to offend you but there were parts of this that i just found kind of amatureish. the vocalist needs some more practice and training. i feel like there is to much reverb on the drums and doesnt fit because of it also a lot of the music instruments clash a little like they weree all placed without a snap tool.(wrong terminology thoug srry).
i really like the composition and the message it just sounds like it needs work
Boo. Thanks for the review. I know it sounds kinda shitty, but I tried. I need to redo more of it to get it up to my standards, but I don't have a million dollar studio. I do with what I got, which isn't a lot.
im glad to hear a melody in this song. i wasnt going to review this but i decided to anyways. this song is really what house is all about. its calm relaxing uplifting creative and progressive. i feel a great ammount of envy for those with the nice programs and computers and freedom to make music. i dont know if you still act like a dick but this song is a great song reguardless.
When I was acting like a dick ? :D But thanks for honest review.
i liked the bass line a lot and there was a nice sub melody in there. it sounds like jazz and house had a baby :D. i feel lke more needs to happen. it just sounds plain and rehearsed if you know what i mean. i do like the song i just wish something more would happen.
Thanx mayne, I had like 2 combined sorta but yea, trust me the lyric version of this makes it feel like more for sure. Thanx for da review!!!
some things to consider.
1. trance usually has a more dominant melody but the melody here almost doesnt exist at all.
2. with this kind of composition i would call it house especially with that strong bass line.
3. the quality is nice but i think you should spend more time on your eq.
4. all things being said this piece is actually really good there are just some technical flaws and i would change the genre.
your welcome :)
Thx for all the advice I will keep all of this in mind in my next composition!
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
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