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that first instrument it does not sound good applied the way it was keep the same notes but stop with that synth ok

the rest of the song after getting through that instrument was actually pretty good
do me a favor and pm me if you make any more wips of this or finish it

it sounds like it will be good so keep it up and keep me posted.......pleeeease :3

The-Cockenator responds:

haha i will do that ;) just keep cheking out my stuff :D

im sorry for your loss

this song really isnt that bad i dont know why people voted it so bad

it is a little amateur but practice will get you places

try to make that bass harmony stand out even though it might cover your pretty counter melody you can bring it back out by shooting it up an octave

Calamaistr responds:

Hmm, well the thing is theres a sub melody going on most of the times, if i upped the bass harmony it would overlap that, in fact i already tried upping the bass tones but chose to lower it again so i know what you're getting at.

The only thing that bothers me personally is kindof how empty the intro sounds, or its just not the right instrumentation for it, though it is later on.

Choices.

Thanks for the review :)

p.s. dont get what you mean by amateur, in what way exactly?

not bad

the bass kinda overpowers a lot of the other elements of this song specifically that led one try to soften it or keep it a bit quieter love the beat btw congrats there

well

i cant find any flaws really but i do think the dubstep one was better

Solkrieg responds:

I'm actually glad you think that ^_^.

thank you sir

i enjoyed this song very much thank you kindly

aDeafBat responds:

You're more than welcome.

you sir could use some help

pm me if you want some

rasteexXxuss responds:

Lol keep forgetting to say they're wips and I made this drunk out of my mind. That might be why.

its

really repetitive but its pretty nice good quality try adding some dynamics

ESTAR48 responds:

thanks for hearing, i make my beats like trances (that means repetitive) its my style, thanks for the advice, very useful for me thanks

well id say

nice setup nice song im not a fan of the shifting back and forth between left and right with nothing coming from one side you should leave a little one one side so your ears dont feel all funny

small question

how do you go about making your music?? sounds almost as if your doing it manually with a recorder
try to stay away from having so many notes hit in one spot it makes it sound amateur when so many notes hit right there at the first beat

this is nice

the best educational song ive ever heard

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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