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its always interesting when a musician such as yourself say that they "suck" when theyre obviously better then half of the people here on ng
yes there are problems with this song but at least it sounds as good as it does and at least you realize that there is problems others are either ignorant to the problems or are like me and just dont know how to fix those problems due to being a beginner

GrayZ responds:

Thanks, I think i've just lost patience with music haha, I need a break I think but thank you :)

ya know

i just got on newgrounds in order to listen to the original of this song but i noticed i had mail and im like " mail ! i love mail " and to my surprise its a newer better version of the song i was just about to listen to XD
i like this version better n_n . it seems put together better i also sense a change to the piano but i dont know for sure id have to listen to the old one to be sure.

this is really great stuff man you could really go somewhere with it

Solkrieg responds:

Thanks a lot! Everyone loves mail...unless it's an invoice... I hate invoices.

....heh

i dont listen to a lot of industrial but i listen enough to know that this is not industrial. its nice but not industrial. i would say it has potential though. on that metal instrument you have there add a little reverb and make the release softer and drag out a little. try and give the drums more depth and add a few more patterns while your at it. you might want to try and time out the entrances of that metal instrument as well.

this song has almost a crazy robot war prep kinda feel its nice :)

TechnicolourNuance responds:

Have you listened to KMFDM or Rob Zombie or even the Smashing Pumpkins? :p The bass might not have been industrial, but I tried.xD Industrial isn't purely electronic-.-
ANyways. Thanks for the advice. I'mma update with my band and see if I can add the bass in. :3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MKxosf l1E2g
(KMFDM - Juke-Joint Jezebel)

i like but

i feel its missing something a flare or spark of some sort if you follow me. maybe by adding some hard hitting dynamics you can change the feel

meh

i dont think this is your best work it just sounds a little noobish to me tha quality and overall song is good but i didnt get that "wow this is a great song" that i usually get from your music

uhhh

i dont have much problems with the actual song but it sounds like there is a lot of recording quality issues im guessing it was done that way on purpose??

RandomDanceOfHappy responds:

The lyrics. Are iffy I did my best to hide it ;) Im still working on it!!! Another thing is its not mastered and still working. On limiters. But I need to check the. Bass. Before I tune stuff. Thanks for ur time!!

nice song bro

i really like this but i think that at the beginning bass was a little to hard no complaints for the rest of the song though

what would help here

is adding some longer sustained notes to hold it together much like at 1:02 you have so many moving notes that the original harmony of the song doesnt keep the song together well enough also at 1:02 try adding a crescendo and some slowly rising hard hitting dynamics on that string synth

it might be good

if you messed with the eq to make it sound a bit more crisp like the piano you have. the rest of the song sounds almost muted ya know?? i also think you should add some dynamics and maybe a few tempo changes

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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