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ok it sounds very rough like the volume way up way to high and you can barely understand the vocals this song almost sounds like some aircraft pilots got bored and decided to play a song to ground control over the radio if thats what you were going for ok but i dont think it works for makeing music

BiviZ responds:

Ahah :D
Rly? Dat track is so old, im recorded that when i was 14 (now im 17) for lulz :)

very good

i really like the way this sounds but i feel its a bit to repetitive it may not be repetitive but i cant tell at all till about :48 and then it seems to do it again afterwards just try to keep an eye out for it also some dynamics would work wonders for this song

interesting

for your first time its quite good
when you make music its important that the melody stands out a bit more make it noticeable your melody sounds more like a counter melody to get rid of that feel try to bring the drum vol. down just a tad and bring up the melody vol. a bit and lengthen the melody notes its ok to have those staccato like notes just note to short and not so reoccurring just a little here and there as far as concept it was great you have loads of potentail
btw just out of curiosity what program did you use to make this

BiviZ responds:

ahah)
thanks for advices, very interesting to reading.
Im using Reaper and vst plug in Guitar rig 3 and Ez Drummer with kit wakawaka from hell :3

nice but

it did the same thing for like 30 secs its not the smartest move just saying

..... :'(

i dont usually write reviews for top fives but i had to
your song im sorry but to me was the epitome of sad songs i have never in my life ever come close to tears due to one song if i wasent holding it in i would have started bawling this song speaks to me it so many ways i didnt even know a song could thank you from the bottom of my heart this song is 100% perfection thank you

this song

its very good but i feel it could be better honestly the entire song sounds like the intro to what ever is next but then its over its good but i would like to hear more make it longer please

Freeload responds:

Yeah a friend wanted to hear it.. It's not really done ;p uploaded it here cus it's faster than sending over skype.

creativity and movement

it needs to go somewere its to plain the melody works you just need more

you

need to remake this song to be longer its good

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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