volume?
it was a bit quiet also repetitive it needs to be spiced up a bit
volume?
it was a bit quiet also repetitive it needs to be spiced up a bit
i like
it moves quite well i both liked and disliked the vocals though i thought it was very creative but it could have used some dynamics some cresendos would have been great
for the most part
WAAAAAAAAAAAT NO SOMEBODY HIT THE KILL SWITCH MY EARS CANT HANDLE THESE AWESOME BEATS but theres a part in me that says it could have been better im gona side with the caps lock opinion but i think i would like it if you looked it over later and see if you can find that tiny little something that feels missing
I have yet to find that missing item :/
......REMAKE
this song has so much potentail i think you could drown somebody with it its really goodd it just needs more
nice
i think that the piece could have been better perhaps by putting in a counter melody also i think the harmony could have used some work
Well, I could try, but I suck in counter melodies. If I were any good at that, I would've probably already done that :P
cynic
cynic won but barely helsalive first verse wasent good enough if his firts was as good as his second then he could have won
madflex
madflex won before it started greenskullkid didnt bring anything to the battle it was like listening to a middle school kid madflex destroyed it props to him
same problem
this one is also very good but the drums on this were just a little high your bass drum is fine its just the other parts toms cymbals and snares shouldnt be quite as loud soften their attack slightly and volume on this song and the other song i just reviewed with the same problem and you got yourself a 10/10 :)
drums
i really like this especially when the guitar first comes in the only thing the drums are compleatly over powering the rest of the song i had to turn up my volume to hear the guitar lower the volume on the drums please
..... O.o wow
it first i was like this crap isnt drum n bass at all but then at :44 i was like somebody stop it my heads gona blow is this a work in progress ?? cause its way to short for you to not make more if it is and you finish it do me a fav and pm me
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 30, Male
fixing the world
usa ohio
Joined on 8/23/10