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hmmmmmm

it takes too long to get anywhere i mean for something hard and up beat you need to make it go faster and i dont mean just tempo but more importantly there are measures that just dont need to be in there its not like its climaxing its an ok song just needs better composition k

omg thank you

this is my favorite type of music where it starts off nice and soft and easy and slowly but surely builds and builds and builds with all the different sounds since i have been on new grounds which has only been like half a year but all the same i havent found any music like this so thank you its well put together btw

weemeee responds:

Yeah, i tend to do that alot, you might want to check out some of my other stuff too ;)
Thanks for reviewing!

pure talent

ok not only did you make the song difrent you made it sound amazing a lot of people atempt things like this and it crashes in fire because they dont know what theyre doing or honestly just suck so for remakeing such a great song with such success you have earned yourself an amazing amount of respect from a lot of people you did a good job of changing it withought loosing too much of the origional feeling very well put together i like this as much as the origional congrats

feelin it

i like this song a lot the way it just flows back and forth its well done the composition is very well thought out

movement

the way this song moves around with all the different things going on is well executed its beautiful

wyldfyre1 responds:

Thanks for listening.

remake

honestly i think there is a huge potential to this little loop i would do it myself if i had the stuff to do it heck when i get the stuff to do it i probably will butt seriously this could be made into an epic song top ten quality

FuNaNdMoRe responds:

Thanks :D

harmony

i like it a lot but i think u could hav added a bit more harmony its like the best cereal in the world is the best but if it dosent hav milk than i would rather settle for the cereal in the middle with milk u kno

i just dont know what it is

i like this piece something about it is catching me i think it is how the melody and harmony seem to almost talk to each other i think you could hav put a bit more emotion into it but all the same i like it all the same

Gravey responds:

I really tried to make the melody and harmony lines interact as you said. the idea being that they should not only build upon one another, but to also complement each other. Glad that you came to this realization when listening to this piece. Means I must have done something right. :-)

-Gravey-

good

i think there could have been a larger difference in the dynamics i think it would have been a lot better if u put more and less emphasis on the different areas of the music to point out a climax which is what this piece seems to have trouble showing

Michael425 responds:

I agree with you. It does start to blend together. I tried my best to make the ending sound like the climax without it going too loud.

Thanks for the review.

~{425}~

i like this

u did a good job of keeping it all together and not ruining it

DOS-L responds:

Thanks! Glad the crazy part of the cycle didn't ruin it for ya :D

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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