trancestep
its a very trancey dubstep i like itthe vocals are good too
trancestep
its a very trancey dubstep i like itthe vocals are good too
Thanks bro I'm, glad you like it!
well
first off i love the piano it worked wonderfully there seems to be more trance then dubstep in here i was hoping to hear some more dubstep the dubstep at 1:54 2:34 i dont think it fit well with the rest of the piece it was one of those note arrangements that just sounded weird to me its like hitting b and b flat at the same time it just ruined it a bit for me for the rest of the song though i thought it was great i think you should make the build right before the dubstep parts should have been more dramatic and shouldve crescendoed some more there as well
I tried as much as I could to create a build, but I'm unsure how to do it in this case. Although I was hoping I did good on the dubstep part.
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if you can make music this good then why did you make that other song i reviewed so bad??
do something
the quality is good the drums are nice but it doesent really do anything it just kinds sits there
I appreciate that, the whole process of this song (over the course of less than 5 minutes) was finding a beat that I liked, then recording whatever I played to it.
Why? Because I never do that. xD
But I understand what you mean about the drums, there's no switchup here. Expect something with a little more effort posted in a short while. :]
uuum
the music is really good but i dont like the sound of the vocals as for lyrics not the best but not bad either
i like this
s like how it all goes together and supports itself well thought out
Thanks
holy freaking crap
this song...what kind of monster are you??? i honestly dont think that you need any feed back this song is pure epic to the power of awesome i dont care if its a remix as far as i know you own it it sounds amazing 5d favorited and downloaded i think its mainly the quality of the song that makes me like it so much it sounds professional
Wow thanks so much for the positive feedback!
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i dont care for this to much :( srry i still 5d it it sounds to inconsistent i also think it should be longer i think it has potential but it just doesent do it for me srry
ps im working with the fl demo as well so i totally feel your pain
Don't be sorry bro. :3
Well, do you think it fits my goal?
Anyways. What didn't you likee? Such as, how wasn't it consistent? Drum beats changed when I changed the pattern?
Well, thank you though. :3
Glad to see some honesty.
harmony
it needs some kind of harmony to fill the bits of emptiness here and there i also agree with solkrieg that the note placement could be a bit more regulated some of it dosent work to great over all its good but can definately be better
Well, where doesn't it work? I tried to link chord to another chord. I'm thinking towards the end though, right? Well, could you try a stab at it and show me what you mean? I might be a little blocked cuz I know it this way. D:
Also, I'm working on trying to create harmonies, but that's an area I lack. I can make chords but screw with harmonies and melodies. I'm only good with chords. -.-
Thank you though. :3
breaks
the breaks are fine but i would have put in an instrument that dosent break at 10 because it just bugs my ears all the harsh breaks without any relief
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 30, Male
fixing the world
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