me like
i didnt care for the beggining though please when the full version is done pm me
me like
i didnt care for the beggining though please when the full version is done pm me
for the most part
its good but the breaks are a little harsh try and make the breaks softer
How ?
nice but
i actually really love that beginning arp melody but at :23 when that instrument that sounds like mr. game and watch that instrument does not go to well with the rest of the piece also a counter melody made the right way would be amazing in this song finally your low bass which seems to be filling the harmony spot at spots like :44 should sound a bit softer and smoother but in the other places its fine also a counter harmony would be just epic here especially at 1:28 i would like it if you tried to remake this and sent me a pm when its done
Thanks for leaving a comment and making some suggestions. But I like to keep my songs sort of minimalistic, so I'm probably not going to change anything lol, maybe if the left side of my earphones start working again
EDIT: I feed harmony to my cat
nice but
that beginning instrument wow um its a bit much i feel it over powers a lot of the instruments taking away from that great dnb feel i love from your music also just a suggestion but also with that beginning instrument and beat i think it would sound awesome if it started out quiet and then gradually got louder to make one big crescendo from :00 to :16 also make it hit really hard on :37 and bring the volume up on everything there as well like i said just some advice you dont have have to do it otherwise its really good
NO, i dont mind the advice. There always good. I'll try apply all these advices in my future projects ;)
Thanks for the review!
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cant you just tackle your wips one by one and send those out to us instead of teasing us like this??? hurry up and finish your work man
amazing but
have you made this piece before or something it sounds incredibly familiar
No, I have not. The chord progression, however, is very common. That may be what you are hearing.
a name??
how about "here with you"
i hope its not to bad of a name its just what spoke to me
omgsh please
when you finish this please pm me and tell me awesome stuff
composition
learn the word at the top and learn how to use the skill music is more then just some notes that sound ok together if i made this sound with a non demo music creation system then it would only take like 3 to 5 hrs tops and your saying it took you 72 ??? i also find this song to be a bit boring as well it didnt do anything much just a few changes here and there better than the last one though
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 31, Male
fixing the world
usa ohio
Joined on 8/23/10