decoyultimatum's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walkin' Towards Some Dreams]

ok here we go

for concept 10/10
i like the direction this piece went its calming and relaxing. makes you feel good inside yaknow.

development 9/10
i really liked the song as far as the different parts it had. each section was very beautiful but, there could have been some more progression. as you listen to specific parts you just start wondering when its going to move on and thats not what you want your listeners to think.

construction 9/10
everything was pieced together smoothly there were not any odd loose ends on the sections and the transitions were flawless but, the sections that carried on too long without development should be fixed.

quality 8/10
first off the strings in the beginning could've sounded more realistic there was a few mastering issues and the song needed more dynamics.

creativity 9/10
i can tell you didn't just slap this together there is some real emotion in here and i appreciate it. a lot of songs on ng are very empty if you want me to listen to any of your other songs please tell me

Stavier responds:

I like the variation in this review. Sometimes I get reviews like these and sometimes I got small reviews, but I like these kind. Yeah, didn't wanna make hype or anythin', just nice. Yeah, I agree, I didn't add so much, but the project is actin' goofy so IDK if I can update. I only made some longer cuz if someone raps to this then I want them to add a good amount of lyrics. I accidently made the hi-hats a lil' too much, but like I said, the project is a lil' goofy and I agree, the strings are actin' weird, I think I may've put slow strings rather than full strings. Mmmhmmm, I worked hard on this one, I always all effort. Thanx for the review!!!

[Encounter (SEI)]

so..

i think this one needs some work some of the instruments just dont work and there is some problems with the flow of the song

there could be a little more progression and a bit more melody change

i do like the concept a lot though it can definitely go somewhere

Seifire responds:

Thats understandable. I felt like the flow sounded a bit forced instead of natural and i was having some trouble altering the melody change so i just submitted it.

[Fire (Elements)]

very relaxing

but personally i think the dnb parts of the song couldve been reinforced a bit

the bass was not very strong at all and the drums couldve hit a bit harder and played a bigger role themselves

Cobaliptic responds:

You're absolutely Right!

This is my very very first attempt at making a DnB song, and i'm a kind of DJ that focus a lot on putting a lot of details and Everyting in order to make the song look completely done, no holes etc. And playing with such samples (drum, Mid Lead, Bass, Piano at the end) was very difficult ^^. Remastering was really a pain in the ass and I think, even with the not that loud drum and Bass, I did a good job :o .

You should stay tuned, because i'm soon uploading some of my first steps in House Music! ^_^

[AuruxBlu - You Complete]

well

i liked this it was quite uplifting

the intro was very interesting because it had a different feel but when you get to the main song it cleans up nicely

AuruxBlu responds:

Thanks, appreciate it

[Kokiri Forest e-Guitar]

well

the guitar was too loud and overpowering and clashed with the other instruments also the guitar sounds kinda like a preset i heard on fl try to customize it more

7-Bit responds:

Ok thanks, I appreciate your review :)

[Ice Pop]

i liked

this its very dancy and uplifting good job

i didnt like that string synth you used though it just didnt sound realistic enough

megawolf77 responds:

Thank-you very much!

And I agree with you. The string synths I use were sounded too fake. My bad.

Thanks again!

[-KA89- Perpetual (WIP)]

this

1:07-1:10 i dont like the chord

the rest is turning out good

Kyleadam89 responds:

thanks, i've gotta rework some segments so i'll give that section special attention when I get back to it

[NGHH - McFist vs Boss]

well

i was going to vote boss until the second round. mc fist seemed to hit a nerve of bosses and when he rapped with that angrier voice he didnt deliver as well which i didnt like his insults just seemed empty. i liked mc fists style also it was different and knew.

anyways i liked mc fist more

[NGHH - Slap vs Wyze]

wyze win

wyze delivered more in my opinion. slap happy only had one or two decent blow and that just isn't enough. wyze was pretty solid and held his own while throwing some good blows at the same time. he isnt the best ive heard but he is better then slap happy

[**Zelda's Lullaby**]

this was really pretty

i never heard lyrics to this song before

are these lyrics original lyrics or did you make them

either way if thats your voice then may i say you have a very pretty voice

its very soothing and peaceful

makes me want to take a nap :)

VGSongbird responds:

The lyrics are original.
And yes, those are my vocals ^_^
I'm happy to hear you enjoyed them.

Now go take a nap :D