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hmm

i usually really like your stuff but im not to sure with this

it doesnt seem to flow quite right

weemeee responds:

that might be because i spent 5 minutes on this, lol

i wasnt sure

till the dubstep came in the dubstep was really good but there were some quality issues with the piano there was some scratching here and there too

Voltbishop responds:

the scratching and stuff with piano was done on purpose :/

cool

its very calm and relaxing but moving at the same time

i feel that it couldve progressed a little better and faster

the melody was a little nonexistent add a some more moving notes in the melody so its more defined

the fact that you took my other review seriously makes me very happy by the way

the reason i reviewed your other stuff was because usually when i hear music in the portal i try to review their other songs if it sounds like they could use some extra help

it was then i was surprised to hear some good music

nice

you need to work on cleaning up the drums theyre a tad heavy

the composition and concept were very good though the flow of the whole thing was very nice as well

its a good happy dance track

lol hi seifire

such a nice guy he is tis why we are friends

im not gona be so nice lol sorry

for a first its not bad there is some mastering problems here and there but it being your first you probably didnt even master anyways

it doesnt flow very well but thats ok too i guess

you need to focus more on trying to have multiple layers and have them all work together

this one

has a lot of composition errors as well

i highly suggest that you look into what makes music its a lot more complicated then a lot of people think

from the

first five notes i thought this had loads of potential but then it continued

the only real problem with it is the composition

your notes just dont work

ok but

its a little rough around the edges you need to place your notes better but the concept is really good but it needs a little work with the melody and development

its a decent dnb the drums were really nice id say this a pretty good genre for you

awesome

as always

i really like the feel of this one it has a kind of redemption feel to it

i think the drums stole a little to much of the song but mainly because the kick seemed a little over powering in this song but at the same time there was a few spots where the kick was just fine its mainly the drums from parts like from :16 to :32

it just distracted from the rest of the song a little in my opinion

O-Prime125 responds:

Thank you for your review, I get what you mean, im glad you enjoyed it! :)

this is

very calming

there are a few notes and chords i wouldnt have chosen but the concept and structure of this song is very good

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

Age 30, Male

fixing the world

usa ohio

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