congrats
this is really good i respect you and your talents keep it up
congrats
this is really good i respect you and your talents keep it up
well
i think you need a little more structure in this song but this is really good it fills up nicely there isnt any spots where it just doesnt sound right
you need to work on transitions now
thanks for your review, I was gonna work more on the transitions in this song, I know it's a huge problem of mine, but I was gonna take a lot of time in the post production of this, try to fix it up better, but thanks again, as always your opinions are a very welcome part of my growth as a musician.
add some
more builds and dynamics
it also sounds like it needs a second melody some kind of 8 bit chip tune thats fast short to help pick up the song and help it feel like its going the speed it is does that make sense
very good composition and its organized well too
tell me when its done
well made it longer and yea its not going to be any longer soon im making new sounds to fit in but it takes time ;) but here is the longer version
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/451444
the builds
i think could have been a bit better
try building different instruments at a time instead of the entire song does that make sense?
everything else is perfect quality and mastering and instruments and mixing
dont stop keep it up
I understand what you're saying, but I did do that lol.
the only reason
i gave it a nine is because i felt it was to repetitive
everything else was just flawless though you have some real talent
lol repetitive i agree, but its for a rap so i mean its kinda a given its going to be repetitive. anyway thanks a lot for the compliment and review!
hey whats this
this is good i mean really good
you got some structure issues but other then that
good job really good job
i would offer to colab but i cant make anything right now
if i can fix my computer soon ill ask though but of course it would have to be ok with you
keep at it man your getting there
Hey thx. Alright whenever u get ur computer fixed let me know, I'd love to do a collab, im stuck on this song.
this song
is a good example of my favorite type of dubstep
its just so dirty and beautiful at the same time
its like an extremely host and sexy girlfriend that just touched me absolutely every way possibly
it makes me all hot inside
im afraid to make comparisons like this but your skill level is easily close to people like acid paradox and xkore
if you keep doing this you will find yourself a good job doing this
this sounds
like a remix of another song
it sounds too similar
its not bad
but the original was better
if you dont believe me ill send you a link
the similarity is just to much
if your gona remix a song by the way you should really give some credit to the original
of whats on the top 5 this week
this deserves the top place
its just a much higher quality of music
Thanks very much decoyltimatum. There are some great songs in the top 5 this week. Im simply astonished im even on it at all! Thanks!
well
your composition and structure is really good
i think its missing a few key elements to help the song pop
you do have a very nice drum beat though you should be proud of it even though its not the best drums they actually do something unlike a lot of drums in a lot of songs
I could probably make the drums sound better once I add some effects to them, master them, well thank you for listening and reviewing, it means alot in my road of improvement =D (also i was quite proud of the simple yet satisfying drum work)
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 30, Male
fixing the world
usa ohio
Joined on 8/23/10