i wasnt sure
till the dubstep came in the dubstep was really good but there were some quality issues with the piano there was some scratching here and there too
i wasnt sure
till the dubstep came in the dubstep was really good but there were some quality issues with the piano there was some scratching here and there too
the scratching and stuff with piano was done on purpose :/
cool
its very calm and relaxing but moving at the same time
i feel that it couldve progressed a little better and faster
the melody was a little nonexistent add a some more moving notes in the melody so its more defined
the fact that you took my other review seriously makes me very happy by the way
the reason i reviewed your other stuff was because usually when i hear music in the portal i try to review their other songs if it sounds like they could use some extra help
it was then i was surprised to hear some good music
nice
you need to work on cleaning up the drums theyre a tad heavy
the composition and concept were very good though the flow of the whole thing was very nice as well
its a good happy dance track
lol hi seifire
such a nice guy he is tis why we are friends
im not gona be so nice lol sorry
for a first its not bad there is some mastering problems here and there but it being your first you probably didnt even master anyways
it doesnt flow very well but thats ok too i guess
you need to focus more on trying to have multiple layers and have them all work together
this one
has a lot of composition errors as well
i highly suggest that you look into what makes music its a lot more complicated then a lot of people think
from the
first five notes i thought this had loads of potential but then it continued
the only real problem with it is the composition
your notes just dont work
ok but
its a little rough around the edges you need to place your notes better but the concept is really good but it needs a little work with the melody and development
its a decent dnb the drums were really nice id say this a pretty good genre for you
awesome
as always
i really like the feel of this one it has a kind of redemption feel to it
i think the drums stole a little to much of the song but mainly because the kick seemed a little over powering in this song but at the same time there was a few spots where the kick was just fine its mainly the drums from parts like from :16 to :32
it just distracted from the rest of the song a little in my opinion
Thank you for your review, I get what you mean, im glad you enjoyed it! :)
this is
very calming
there are a few notes and chords i wouldnt have chosen but the concept and structure of this song is very good
hmm
there are some really ( and i mean really ) nice melodies in this but its flow is a bit off it just doesnt fit properly
if you want i would just looooove to mess with this its really pretty and i want to see if i can do anything with it
ive been having a block myself but if i mess with this it could pull me out of it :)
pm me and tell me if it would be ok with you and what you used to make it kay?? :3
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
Age 31, Male
fixing the world
usa ohio
Joined on 8/23/10