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congrats

this is really good i respect you and your talents keep it up

well

i think you need a little more structure in this song but this is really good it fills up nicely there isnt any spots where it just doesnt sound right

you need to work on transitions now

Kyleadam89 responds:

thanks for your review, I was gonna work more on the transitions in this song, I know it's a huge problem of mine, but I was gonna take a lot of time in the post production of this, try to fix it up better, but thanks again, as always your opinions are a very welcome part of my growth as a musician.

add some

more builds and dynamics

it also sounds like it needs a second melody some kind of 8 bit chip tune thats fast short to help pick up the song and help it feel like its going the speed it is does that make sense

very good composition and its organized well too
tell me when its done

The-Cockenator responds:

well made it longer and yea its not going to be any longer soon im making new sounds to fit in but it takes time ;) but here is the longer version
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/451444

the builds

i think could have been a bit better

try building different instruments at a time instead of the entire song does that make sense?

everything else is perfect quality and mastering and instruments and mixing

dont stop keep it up

Solkrieg responds:

I understand what you're saying, but I did do that lol.

the only reason

i gave it a nine is because i felt it was to repetitive

everything else was just flawless though you have some real talent

DJM00se responds:

lol repetitive i agree, but its for a rap so i mean its kinda a given its going to be repetitive. anyway thanks a lot for the compliment and review!

hey whats this

this is good i mean really good

you got some structure issues but other then that

good job really good job

i would offer to colab but i cant make anything right now

if i can fix my computer soon ill ask though but of course it would have to be ok with you

keep at it man your getting there

Seifire responds:

Hey thx. Alright whenever u get ur computer fixed let me know, I'd love to do a collab, im stuck on this song.

this song

is a good example of my favorite type of dubstep

its just so dirty and beautiful at the same time

its like an extremely host and sexy girlfriend that just touched me absolutely every way possibly

it makes me all hot inside

im afraid to make comparisons like this but your skill level is easily close to people like acid paradox and xkore

if you keep doing this you will find yourself a good job doing this

Solkrieg responds:

>_> Oh lawrdy.

Thanks for the encouragement! :D

this sounds

like a remix of another song

it sounds too similar

its not bad

but the original was better

if you dont believe me ill send you a link

the similarity is just to much

if your gona remix a song by the way you should really give some credit to the original

of whats on the top 5 this week

this deserves the top place

its just a much higher quality of music

EvilRaccoon responds:

Thanks very much decoyltimatum. There are some great songs in the top 5 this week. Im simply astonished im even on it at all! Thanks!

well

your composition and structure is really good

i think its missing a few key elements to help the song pop

you do have a very nice drum beat though you should be proud of it even though its not the best drums they actually do something unlike a lot of drums in a lot of songs

Kyleadam89 responds:

I could probably make the drums sound better once I add some effects to them, master them, well thank you for listening and reviewing, it means alot in my road of improvement =D (also i was quite proud of the simple yet satisfying drum work)

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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