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well

first off that hat you got is to strong
its actually messing with the volume

the melodies you got are nice and relaxing and the flow they have is actually really nice

you need to work on progression a little and you need to learn how to equalize your music

it really does have a good feel it just needs more work

its like an old truck

ya it runs nice but it still has a little trouble starting and the paint job is just a mess

trazzz123 responds:

Thanks a bunch
Iv'e only been making electronic music since the middle of this summer so I'm getting the hang of it.

all you need

is to get a bit better with harmonies and putting it all together properly

the melodies are really nice a 10 themselves but they need more support

also in the begining when the drums came in they didnt match until the melody changed to a darker tone

if you would email me this file it would mean a lot to me i wana mess with it

its epicdorkestra@ymail.com

Kyleadam89 responds:

thanks, yeah I have been a bit pressed for time lately, well thanks again

i really

enjoyed this

this is easily some of your best work

the flow of the song gives so much room for emotion its just beautiful

you outdid yourself my friend

of you keep working on your music i doubt you will have much trouble getting into the music production business

O-Prime125 responds:

I am really glad to hear that, I really did work hard on this track, I guess it would be a dream come true if I got recognised. Thank you.

actually

no matter how good the quality is and how amazing the rest of your music is i dont like this

it sounds like a slower version with some new instruments

it doesnt sound very creative at all

sorry

it literally sounds like you spent maybe an hour on it and thats it

i expect more from you

i dont know why

but it sounds to simple or something

i think its the beginning strings i dont like

the rest of it is quite pretty though

i enjoyed the piano

O-Prime125 responds:

That's why it's a work in progress lol, I know it sounds a little simple but once it's completed it will sound much better :), thank you for your review though! ^^

well

the clap in the beginning was a little to harsh

what i really did like in this was the progression and the flow

you had some real good melodies in this one as well

Kyleadam89 responds:

thanks, i'll definitely adjust it when I can

you know you are not bad

just inexperienced

you need to try to add some harmony and dynamics to your music it well help your music a lot

Kyleadam89 responds:

haha well thanks, this is just something to add perscpective and confirm the inexperience, but i've never touched an instrument, studied music, or had anything to do with music creation until I was 20. . . i've only been making music for 2 years, i taught myself how to work everything and i'm still learning. . I know this isn't a typical response to a review, but i'm atypical lol. . .thanks again though

well

i like the melody in this but it should string together the rest of the song a little better. the connection is a little off

it should really be a bit longer but thats my preference

the drums were a little heavy but the kick was ok

also it sounds like your drums are some sore of preset are they?

if they are try adjusting them a little and add some reverb to make them at least a little different

Kyleadam89 responds:

the drums are part of the basic pack samples with FL Studio, I need to get better ones, but yeah this track needs more attention in general, I tend to get pretty distracted at times lol

ok ..

the concept and overall flow of this song was nice but i feel it shouldve been more dramatic and try adding some effects and drops

little things like that can really carry a song to the next level

Kyleadam89 responds:

I agree, and when I get more time to focus i'll definitely apply your suggestions, thanks again

well

i dont think it is as good as the original but its good

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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