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as for the music itself i really like it. the lyrics from :22-:42 i felt lacked power and quality. when you jumped into it after that it it was better. i liked the message. this type of rap is actually my favorite type of rap. it help me release stress, especially when life is giving me shit.

Teqneek responds:

Thanks for the review dude. I'm glad you liked the song for the most part.

The intro was intentionally more somber and monotone, just so you know.

its not very captivating, it gets boring around the middle and i stop wanting to listen. i guess its just a general dislike for the song. however i did like the quality of the different instruments. i also liked the instruments chosen. i just want to see more happening in this song. btw yes i know its house i still feel the same way

lazy-dave responds:

Thanks for the review! Disappointing to hear you didn't enjoy it. However I'm pleased hear you like the quality of the instruments and such. Thanks for the review, I always appreciate some criticism!

im frustrated while listening to this song the opening is very misleading. i love the opening but then it turns into a completely different song. can you understand what i mean. the song was fine i was just expecting a different kind of song and then it jumps ship on me and im left with something unrelated. it just feels disjointed like two separate songs

DJT3chnic responds:

Hardstyle: intro > Climax > Outro. But, I do understand what you are saying. When i first heard Hardstyle I thought the same thing. Thanks for the feedback =)

try not listening to the radio lol seriously use youtube and pandora and you wont have that problem. its interesting... i didnt think i would like it but it really isnt that bad. i still prefer the original though. considering the nature of the song i have to give you props.

steelside responds:

you have no idea how difficult it was to do this, and it sounds so simple in the end because of my minimalistic preferences, but have a song changing tempo and shit theres a reason the original song is only piano and vocals.

this is what i lwould like to call a work in progress. i guarentee that you are not done with this. first things first the bass lead thing in the beginning was a little strong especially in the begining. another thing ....... i dont know if you got lucky or just worked like hell but this is an extreamly nice piece it has this ost feeling that a lot of people die for just one thing. make it longer. i sugest that when you fade it out right after make a large entrance with the same riff you have going on already but also add some kind of lead instrument and with that lead instrument a melody. im telling you this has the potential to be a great piece. i actually want to add the melody myself but i dont know if that would even be possible. keep it up. seriously

its short and unevenhtfull you need to put more effort into your music. other people like me who actually make music can tell that at least for us this song would take 5 to 10 minutes to make. think about it like this. for every minute you spend working on a song ng will generally give you 1 second of their time

Insanctuary responds:

I agree; which is why 1) It's a 'very' short demo, 2) I was asking for advice, because this is how confused and stopped up I am in this genre. I wanted tips and ways to expand. I didn't want you to say it wasn't expanded enough -- I want to know how I can expand it enough.

ya know you have this horrible habbit of making an amazing song but then keeping it short making people like me sad because they want more but no its over :(. your music has always been great its been a long time since ive heard any of your stuff. do us all a favor and never stop making music

GrayZ responds:

Haha i'll try, after xmad i'll be making my comeback. :)

so the main instrument needs to be softer and less intense. i feel like ive heard these lyrics and vocals before. if you got them from somewhere you need to be sure to let people know. i feel the instrument and the vocals didnt match in their mood

i think the drums need some more variation. i really like the cill cool lax feeling this song has. i think that you could add some variation to the techno instrument its nice but it doesnt do anything. i like the echo on the vocals it adds a good effect to the mood you were setting

ya know i think there is too much reverb on the piano. in the beginning its ok but later when the other instruments come in it doesnt fit quite right especially when the piano gets more complicated near the end. i do like the composition and the flow. i feel like this song shuld have asian instruments in it for some reason. oh well. the style of the music reminds me of the music in the epic battle fantasy series

YouriX responds:

Huh? Thats kinda wierd i didnt add any reverb to the piano. I geuss the preset had to much on itself. Either way i'll have to watch out for that in the near future. Thanks for the heads up! And about adding asians (shamisen) instruments could enhance the song. But i dont want to overuse that sound either. I already made 3 songs with a asian instrument :P

Anyways thanks for the review ;)

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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