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i like this song

its pretty

i like it

makes me happy

i think its kinda sweet. it doesnt matter if your a good singer if you sing it to a girl that likes you she will melt. that set aside were you playing guitar and singing at the same time? if you were try singing to the music and then layering it you can do that with audacity and thats free.all together its rather simple and repetitive but sometimes thats what works

DFerociousbeast responds:

I did make this for a girl indirectly, im sorta in the friendzone at the second with this girl that i really like that is dating my best friend...
...but anyways, i layered it. I tried to do it with both voice and guitar, but my voice was faded in the background so i decided to sing it to the mic...i use mixcraft 5 btw, i do have audacity but i like mixcraft better for some reason...thank you for the response :D

i dont want to offend you but there were parts of this that i just found kind of amatureish. the vocalist needs some more practice and training. i feel like there is to much reverb on the drums and doesnt fit because of it also a lot of the music instruments clash a little like they weree all placed without a snap tool.(wrong terminology thoug srry).
i really like the composition and the message it just sounds like it needs work

sapoman responds:

Boo. Thanks for the review. I know it sounds kinda shitty, but I tried. I need to redo more of it to get it up to my standards, but I don't have a million dollar studio. I do with what I got, which isn't a lot.

its kinda slow and hard to get into but i like where its going and the melody

i honestly believe this to be your best rendition yet. the whole music box feeling and then the transitions and the drop all i can say is eargasim

im glad to hear a melody in this song. i wasnt going to review this but i decided to anyways. this song is really what house is all about. its calm relaxing uplifting creative and progressive. i feel a great ammount of envy for those with the nice programs and computers and freedom to make music. i dont know if you still act like a dick but this song is a great song reguardless.

Norato responds:

When I was acting like a dick ? :D But thanks for honest review.

you need to get yourself some more friends who know a thing or two about music because your really good and it could do you some wonders if you got some tips from different sources.
in the third section the second instrument clashes with the first with the notes it uses im assuming that the third note is flat. i want your second segment so bad right now. i could do so much with it but seeing how im out of practice and i would need to find a nice computer to put the program on i cant really do that can i. i also really like the last segment. i want you to try something so just hear me out i know it will probably be hard but thats the point if you can pull it off it will be worth it. try to make an instrument that carries all the way through this song make it melodic and match the segments when they change. when your done get back to me.

Kyleadam89 responds:

yea this is just a rough draft I wanna fill the transitions in with something, but getting the time and all is a bit harder, but I'll try some things and get back with ya

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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