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for some reason it eels more like a saturday to me :P
really though i like this a lot good progression good melody good emotion.

SamMattimore responds:

haha :P thanks dude :D

ok a couple things. i think your cleans could use some work. i also think that your drums could be stronger and more supportive of the drops. i love your drops there different they stand out while beside other dubstep songs. different is good different will take you further. don't let someone tell you that you need to change your style.

Kruizy responds:

Thank you! :)

:D i havn't heard from you in forever. did you use three guitars in this song?? if you did thats epic. as a bass player myslef i think you need to make the bass stronger specifically on the sustains. also let the bass sustain more :P everything else is amazing.

i liked it a lot. you have progreessed a lot and this song is proof of it. so critique time. there are some pats where the progression wasn't as good as it couldv'e been just a part here and there where adding a small adjustment wouldv'e made all the difference but to a counter to that the rest of the progression was amazing you made an emotion out of your music which is something a lot of people have trouble doing.
great job. don't give up. keep going and keep making music.

Seifire responds:

Thanks decoy, this song took a lot of time and effort and I think I'm fairly happy with the result.

for a dubstep i think it could use stronger dynamics. ya know harder drops softer cleans.the atmosphere was good and the melody was spotless good work.

DJ-Babokon responds:

Thanks but I thought the drop went in pretty hard compared to the breakdowns?

i really like this song. it has a very nice progressive feel but that being said that makes me ask why isn't it longer. you just kinda faded it something tells me you either are not finished or dont want to submit the whole thing. either way i think it should be longer. if this helps you i think you should study daft punk. your style is quite similar to his. not the same but similar

sandordude responds:

It's a demo. I just uploaded it to get some advice. But thanks a lot for the review! When it's finished I'm going to share it on NG!

i think there is a little too much sustain on the reverb on the pianoin the beginning. also this song lacks a strong harmony part especially at parts like :35-1:20.a strong harmony world help a lot. the melody is very nice but it just needs that support

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

I think the reverb is fine, but it needs shortened, so yeah the sustain is a little much. and noted, thanks:]

i think you need a new recorder but other then that the song is quite nice

mmFOOD responds:

Yeah I know. Unfortunately I lack quality equipment and I can't afford it either at the moment. :/ Maybe someday I'll be able to record something in an actual studio.

scuare. scuare is better then he used to be as well. his style reminds me a bit of mad flex. props for that.

congrats i like it :) it doesnt start to well but once the moving notes at :42 come in its really nice. it was a good choice of instrument and it has some good melody and progression. i also like the break with the cymbal at 2:04 it added a good effect

Seifire responds:

Thanks! I decided to use a cymbal for the break rather than an FX because it seemed to fit the mood a bit more.

sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.

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