its a
little to slow to get to the point and grab the listeners attention also im not a fan of that beginning instrument you chose its a little clashy
its a
little to slow to get to the point and grab the listeners attention also im not a fan of that beginning instrument you chose its a little clashy
try
adding a melody right now you only have a harmony a beat and a counter melody.
also this is not techno
also try to make your songs at least 1 minute long
well
i really liked the beginning but then it got way to repetitive try adding something
.... wow
nice job i wouldnt have ever expected to hear something like this
in the beginning i dont think it connected all together to well but that got better as the song went
Cheers :D
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i like the beat and melody for the most part but i feel that the main instrument is a little strong try to make it less harsh
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this is so pretty why isn't it longer?? will you make it longer for me ?? :)
Haha I've been pretty lazy lately, maybe one day lols.
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uuuuuhhh question did you sing the lyrics??? i hate to be mean but you need some lessons
the music in the background was amazing but there is some eq issues whenever the vocals come in you might want to fix that. as for lyrics well in my personal opinion i thought they also sucked but thats an opinion really so that doesnt matter.
seriously though if you enjoy singing rap or singing anything really get some lessons if you cant afford lessons google how to sing or get a book on it.
anybody can learn to sing you just need to put some effort into it ok :)
The vocals were meant to sound like that all our equipment sucks tho cause we crappy equipment. Our music usually sounds better live. Until we get better equipment our music will sound like this always
sup i make music and a bit of art i use fl11 right now. ive been in 3 orchestras a heavy metal band and an alternative rock band . i started composing when i was 10 on the piano and ive been in involved with orchestras since i was 12.
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